It was a really fun story. I got to really think about how fifth graders' minds work and how they're a lot more emotional and sensitive than some stories make them seem. I absolutely loved doing Avani. She is just an adorable, dreamy fifth grader who loves to speak in metaphors. I really hope to see her more in future stories. One of the troubles I had with Lucia was figuring out what should happen next. While I was writing the story, I was constantly changing things in my outline. I took out a lot of things as well. I used to have this scene where Lucia is on the bus to Longgrass and she's talking to Isabelle. Overall, I really enjoyed Lucia and I hope you guys did, too. Thanks for reading!
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